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OC- Gates-practice page

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The paper i used for this is too big for my scanner....so quite a bit of it is cut off, i apologize xD

I practiced using my calligraphy with this one. My line art still needs alot of work though >:
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2552x3508px 1.16 MB
Make
Canon Inc.
Model
Canon MP510
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I think you did a great job, and the lineart isn't bad at all. You've definitely got a pretty good feel for layouts (I struggle a lot with composition and layout so good for you!) I don't know what the situation or story is so I can't really comment but the 4th pannel (assuming this reads like traditional manga) looks a bit too serious - the rest all look like a comedic situation and that one a lone seems a bit out of place.